tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7266470995513648978.post7527596725183900447..comments2024-03-28T10:18:00.370-05:00Comments on Gentlemen of Leisure: X-amining X-Factor #58Austin Gortonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14281239771248780430noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7266470995513648978.post-7141361653873573752015-08-03T16:49:44.780-05:002015-08-03T16:49:44.780-05:00@Blam: Just one more silent panel or a wide group ...@Blam: <i>Just one more silent panel or a wide group shot with perhaps a lone dialogue balloon would’ve helped. As it is, going from this infodump to the next-issue blurb — I dunno; I felt it was jarring is all</i><br /><br />The end is definitely jarring. It almost feels like the next issue box is obscuring a panel or two that more smoothly closes out the issue (it's not, of course). Austin Gortonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14281239771248780430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7266470995513648978.post-13421499538223426352015-07-26T20:02:32.250-05:002015-07-26T20:02:32.250-05:00Simonson using Forge and Banshee (if barely) is on...<br>Simonson using Forge and Banshee (if barely) is one thing, given the increased crossover activity in the X-Titles of late, but I’m surprised Claremont wasn’t more possessive of the word “blackbird”...<br /><br /><i>// As a result of Charlotte Jones' forced role in the Ravens attempts to transform Archangel into one of them, the minds of the two became linked //</i><br /><br />I only quote this to point out that the panel you posted with it is the final panel of the story, making for an oddly abrupt ending. Just one more silent panel or a wide group shot with perhaps a lone dialogue balloon would’ve helped. As it is, going from this infodump to the next-issue blurb — I dunno; I felt it was jarring is all, especially since overall the story was a step above what the series had been offering.<br /><br>Blamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07342343767763035991noreply@blogger.com